Thursday, February 22, 2007

OMG!!!

The story of Anne Frank is really sad. I couldn't imagine being one of them.If i was i would miss my friends but be happy Im with my family. Well i hope Mr. Kraler is going to be able to keep that guy from telling any one that the Franks and the Van Dans are in hiding where the secret door is. That would be even worse because they would get sent off to a concentration camp with the other Jews, or even killed by the Green Police. I can't wait to hear what happens when we finish the book.

1 comment:

Jennifer said...

Good post.
Some grammar mistakes:
Capitalize the pronoun I
Need commas after "If I was,..."
Apostrophe in I'm (I'm with my...)
Daan misspelled
No comma after Jews